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  • on Don't Give Up On Me, Destiny.. by ewwika, on February 12, 2007
    I truely love the metophore you use with the stars. I think that it is important for everyone to have something to place faith in. Whether it be the stars or in Love. This is very deep and beautiful. Very nice work.

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.

  • on oh, lost bird of mine by Keaton Banks, on February 10, 2007

    Awsome

    I love how you compare yourself to a crow. There is alot of meaning behind that. I also love how you describe the moment and the feeling between yourself and the bird. Very Nice.