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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy : Welcome to share poetry Leila21 :) on January 19, 2008
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  • on Down (acoustic lyrics) by skipeople, on February 25, 2008
    I love this poem. The power of repetition is perfectly shown by the way you phrased:
    "Still I keep falling down, down, down
    to where the world can't see my tears"


    The depth and sincerity of this piece was captivating.

    Great write!

    language: 5, rhythm: 4, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.

  • on Ashamed by Leila21, on February 21, 2008
    Thank you both for your comments and helpful suggestions