LifeIsIronic at Share Poetry

Last seen right now. Member since November 17, 2008.
My mood is , and quote is "put the gun in my mouth, it tastes so bitter - seether".
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my last and final question

If you want to waste your time..

241 words, January 6. In Dark, Rant
Short-Sighted

it's a poem, just like everyone elses lol

338 words, 8 comments, December 30, 2008. In Pain, Rant, Rhyme, Thoughts, Weird
Insane.

Not completely finished, probably going to add some more stanzas,..

205 words, 4 comments, December 28, 2008. In Weird, Thoughts, Society, Personal, Pain
Your Cult.

A poem on religion comment as you like..

858 words, 13 comments, December 23, 2008

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DebraLynn : This One's For You on November 30, 2008

I haven’t known you very long,
But feel I know you well.
I don’t believe I’m going wrong.
You’re special, I can tell.

I love to read the things you write,
Hear what you have to say,
Learn what keeps you up at night;
Sustains you through each day.

I’ll happily do anything,
To help you on your quest
To teach your young man’s heart to sing;
To be your very best.

And now I’ll close by saying true,
That his is not the end,
Because I now consider you
Adopted son and friend.
Brian Balzer : Hello LifeIsIronic on November 17, 2008

Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. I have compiled a list of helpful hints I can send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you would like them messaged to you.
Read ya 'round,
BKB

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on Falling Angel by The Distant Unknown, on December 31, 2008

damnit.
lol damnit damnit damnit,... it's good and i told you how i can't help rhyming, so the whole time i was reading it i was wanting to make it rhyme , good poem, as for advice there is no way i would give good advice ,
on Secret by xXrenesmeeXx, on December 30, 2008

damn,..
wow, i'm so sorry, sad, dark, poem,.. the length of the poem kind of comes off as all the years?,.. to me it feels like because of the length and the several instances it feels like you're ya know,.. fly on the wall in the home of hell,.. and you watch what goes on for many years,.. unable to stop what happens, and you keep reading,... Great poem,

i love the instances of the tape...

such as

"And every scar that you made me engrave into my own flesh
Rewound the tape inside my head
Filling me with the agony and dread
To playback your insults, and your laughter at my anguish as you beat me" and " As the tape rewinds itself one more time
To replay that horror movie you created
To make me relive my childhood of panic " as well,