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LisaSchumacher

Hi, my name is Lisa, I really just wanted to join this so that I could share my poetry, and to get peoples opinions on what they think, I hope you guys like my work... Please give me some feed back.

Thanks

  • Last seen on Dec 30 3:27 PM 2008. Member since October 29, 2008.
  • My mood is , and quote is "Good".
  • I am a 16 year old girl (Canada)
  • I have 40 comments, 16 archived poems

My Poetry

  • Broken Down.
    I stand in this room / Empty / The walls come crashing down / I try to pick up the pieces / I can’t / The more I pick up / The faster it comes down / I try to run out / But I’m just pulled back in / I can’t leave / It won’t stop / Al
    54 words, 2 comments, December 3, 2008. In Life, Love, Sad, Thoughts
  • Time.
    Take me back / Back in time / To a time with you / / With the warm summer days / And the cool blissful nights / / Your warm gentle hand
    115 words, 4 comments, November 11, 2008. In Love, Life, Sad
  • This is my story.
    This is my story, / It's sad but clear, / I'm 14 years old, / and the end is near / / My life may be short, / but I'm not that sad / I lived my life to the fullest, / and cherished everything I had / / When I met him that day, / I
    147 words, 8 comments, November 5, 2008. In Life, Love

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  • courage is hope : Hey! on October 30, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry.com. Just like what Brian said, it's a small, yet growing community. We all hope you enjoy your vists here. I would love to read your poetry too!

    Hope.
  • Brian Balzer : Hello LisaSchumacher on October 29, 2008
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet growing community of talented poets. Most of the people here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you ever have any questions feel free to holler. I'm always happy to help when I can. I hope you enjoy your stay. I'd be happy to read your poetry and give you feedback but right now I'm behind on replying to poets who have commented on my poetry and returning the favor of reading thier poetry. I'd feel bad if I didn't read theirs first. Feel free to contact me sometime to see if I'm caught up, or just comment on one of mine cause that's a garuntee read.
    Read ya 'round,
    BKB

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  • on Time. by LisaSchumacher, on December 5, 2008
    Thank you very much, I like the changes you suggested, thank you for your ideas

  • on Broken Down. by LisaSchumacher, on December 4, 2008
    Thank you very much, and I am happy that you could see see the imagery, I was hoping that you would