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LittleCrimsonJester

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  • Scribble
    Penmanship degrades / as fingers swell. / Letters blend together, / eyes squint to read them. / To the outside mind / it's just pages to be
    70 words, 2 comments, October 7, 2008
  • Memorabilia
    The star logo has begun to fade / on her tattered box. / As she slides it out from under the bed / she treasures the feeling of it in her h
    93 words, 3 comments, September 21, 2008
  • Stubborn Missionary
    Always fixing whats not here, / draining ideas of your Christ complex / leaves me vacant. / Your conviction the only thing left. / I am see
    74 words, 4 comments, September 16, 2008

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  • on mojojames by Brian Balzer, on October 7, 2008

    It flows well

    As poetry this poem as kind of a fun sing song feeling to it. It's obvious you have some very personal feelings about it though so I will leave it at that.

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  • on Scribble by LittleCrimsonJester, on October 7, 2008

    Thanks

    I think you are right about the line length I tweaked it a little bit thanks for your thoughts.