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Lonely Traveller

  • Last seen on Aug 29 2:02 AM. Member since March 10, 2006.
  • I am a 21 year old girl (India)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Creative Visualiser.
  • I have 441 comments, 34 archived poems

My Poetry

  • Dear Sunlounger
    In your eyes a thousand suns set, / beautiful nights took over / even more beautiful evenings... / Sunlounger, i shall wait to see / the beauty of a dew drop / touched by the soft first ray of the sun / / a sunrise - in your eyes
    40 words, 4 comments, August 13. In Personal, Love. Reward
  • Sunset
    If i were to drown, / in cold and dark waters / of the sea with the setting sun / / Would you even remember me / after sunrise?
    22 words, 5 comments, April 23. In Dark, Personal. Reward
  • Time
    It still sits in my room / entangled in chains / Questions its offence / and all i can tell it / is "nothing" / / Time just took you away from me / and now i just can't let it go
    31 words, 2 comments, March 20. In Dark, Free verse

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  • on Goodbye by greenergrass93, on August 29

    beautiful is not the word

    "I’m bruised and I’m broken
    A meaningless trace
    I’m rotting on the inside
    I can’t find my place" i love this piece.. i mean i like the whole poem but this brought me back to reading it again.. Wonderful work.. do keep writing...

    traveller

  • on she left me walking by dirty clean poet, on August 18

    ................

    when someone you love walks away without looking back it feels as if cold steel is ripping your heart apart.. i know that feeling.. the poem is lovely... "She left me lying alone with my dreams blown out
    She left me lying alone, I was full of doubt
    About whether that empty pillow next to me
    Would make me lonely, or would it set me free?"

    i like this very much... the feeling at that moment is so full and so empty... both..

    anyways.. wonderful write.. hope to read more..

    Take care
    Traveller