- Last seen on Oct 5 12:34 AM. Member since July 4.
- I am a 21 year old person
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on "They eat at Her by LostHeart, on July 4I need some heads up on this guys. My heart is in writing, but I need to learn the logistics of it.
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on This is what it feels like to be dead ( my suicidal saturday )5/3/08 by SYmPtOm.QuEeR., on July 4
Well written
That was well written with a nice flow.Very creative in this work, I applaud you. You could improve it with a little more description. Make what go away? What was so painful, more description but overall it was great. Beginning and ending lines go great together.
