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  • on the dogs by rhetorica, on June 18
    Nice poem.I don't think I can relate with this,but I'm always thinking that even objects have a soul like humans.My favorite lines:
    "and it`s
    easy enough
    to force yourself
    to fall
    in love
    with anything
    even a lamppost
    if you imagined
    it only shone
    its light
    for you "
    Sometimes I find myself using "she" and "he" instead of "it"
    So those lines kinda relate with my belief that even objects have spirits.I liked your poem.

    Alba

  • on engulf by sequoiaa, on June 18
    Most of the times I don't get the real meaning behind your lines,but that's why I like your poetry.It's not dark,sugary or abstract much.I know we write about different things,but when I read your poetry I get this strange sensation,like I'm writing my own lines while reading yours.