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on Torn Stockings by Windhover, on August 21my first reaction is that it is too simplistic a portrait. it does not reach beyond her surface, the torn stockings are metaphor for her darkness, but the poem only skims the surface. The tag line at the end seems a cheap escape, tho accurate to a degree. The poem is there, the idea, but as yet it is not fully executed.
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well, now reckon I reckon sometimes it's a toss-up, cause I have had a few of both, and there were times I wished that I had had neither.
check out Zara's Dot for dialect.
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