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  • on Something evil is crawling across my psyche by MagicSchoolbus, on July 19, 2009

    Perfect Post

    Thank you much for all those great inputs.
    I wont be changing any of it tho...
    not because i think my way is better but because im going to move forward and try to do better next time.

    I agree with a lot of what you pointed out.

  • on forest exile by old 777, on July 1, 2009
    I would say thats a good thing unless you didn't want it to be. I wouldn't even say that would be the best word it discrib what I was going at.