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Mandie4788

poetry has been my passion for many years now, it helps me get out my feelings thoughts an opinions in a constructive manner.

  • Last seen on Nov 27 4:32 PM. Member since August 19, 2007.
  • I am a 20 year old woman (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm TomTom tech support.
  • I have 6 comments

My Poetry

  • ~The Good Times~
    Time has changed / as did our love / But our time I will frame / in a portrait above / / I'll remember you always / how you were once / Remember the good days / before all the fuss / / I'll remember the good times / not dwell on t
    71 words, 1 comment, August 17. In Love, Sad, Thoughts
  • ~Deception~
    Walking through the woods / lost and confused / How did something so good / become so twisted and used? / / Can't find my way / branches are too thick / Life's full of dismay / just play another trick / / The branches hide the sun
    70 words, August 17
  • ~Gone Away~
    for my mother
    56 words, August 17. In dark

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  • on On the Edge of Death Depressed by marcusmoore, on August 18
    this poem made me cry, it really hit home for me, i myself was saved by life's little joys, her name is jada and she is my niece, we almost lost her at birth and just seeing her fight for life gave me motivation to keep going, you portrayed beautifully the unconditional love that we get from children in our lives, this poem touched me so much i shed a tear or 2 keep up the great work, i'm looking forward to reading more from you. GREAT JOB~!~

  • on changed forever by linaisaloser, on August 18

    wow

    this poem is very deep, i got goose bumps just reading it, the intensity of this poem in just amazing... i really did enjoy reading it, thanks for the share

    ~mandi