poetry has been my passion for many years now, it helps me get out my feelings thoughts an opinions in a constructive manner.
- Member since August 19, 2007.
- I am a 20 year old woman (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm TomTom tech support.
- I have 6 comments, 3 archived poems
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on On the Edge of Death Depressed by marcusmoore, on August 18, 2008this poem made me cry, it really hit home for me, i myself was saved by life's little joys, her name is jada and she is my niece, we almost lost her at birth and just seeing her fight for life gave me motivation to keep going, you portrayed beautifully the unconditional love that we get from children in our lives, this poem touched me so much i shed a tear or 2
keep up the great work, i'm looking forward to reading more from you. GREAT JOB~!~
language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.
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on changed forever by linaisaloser, on August 18, 2008
wow
this poem is very deep, i got goose bumps just reading it, the intensity of this poem in just amazing... i really did enjoy reading it, thanks for the share
~mandi
