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Mel17

Hey there, thanx for cheaking me out lol I am 17 and have been through alot so i write poems they are what inspire me. I love to read them to there is just something about them. If you have any advice fill free to share!




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  • Last seen on Jun 15 2:11 PM 2007. Member since April 16, 2007.
  • I am a 17 year old girl (Canada)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Hanging out with friends and just chilling.
  • I have 3 comments, 1 archived poem

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  • Alone at allpoetry
    You want to be alone with him, / but he's over 100 miles away / You think that you will be alone in the universe with him, / but you can't because there are more then two people out there / Even though he maens everyt
  • How could this happen? at allpoetry
    My best friend, / My ex, / Together, / How could this happen? / Said they were just freinds, / The pain, disowned, betrail, / How can I tell her how I feel? / His hand around her, / Use to be around me, /
  • To late at allpoetry
    To late: about this girl that is waiting for this guy but when he is there it is to late.

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  • on Goodbye by nish81, on June 15, 2007

    wow

    Did you really loss someone, is that what inspired you to write this poem? its really good. I fill that you lost something or someone and that makes me sad

  • on Stoned Again by dave ochs, on June 15, 2007

    Good job

    I really liked your poem it reminds me of myself. I am 17 still a teenager the only thing is my mom doesn't care if I ever come home LOL