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How my mind truly works / is an unknown to me / Splitting the hedges of matter / strewn on the grounds of apocalypse / Marching headstrong into the abyss / The mystery of it all takes a back seat / to my blind
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on untitled by , on March 23, 2006
mindspeak is what I call it
So many thoughts fill our minds... an underlying connection is that it all is you.. the writer.. the observations.. the inner monolouge... the poetry within... awesome abstract imgery Good Write. Rewarded 4
Nice ride
I do enjoy going on a littly adventure now and then... what I mean by this is that embarking upon a journey through the poetry and catching what may be a glimpse of some emotional shadowing of true events and feelings. I enjoy the form as it drags me down, spiral to the depths and looming darkness. I does get a bit thin... not trying to be funny there but I mean that some of the wording matched with the stacked form may tend to lose some readers. This can be fixed by adding anchors and refrain of ideas withtin the poem... althought some rides are long they can be enjoyable. Good write! keep it up.. Rewarded 4