excerpt of "Maidenhood"
by W. W. Longfellow
Bear through sorrow, wrong, and ruth
In thy heart the dew of youth,
On thy lips the smile of truth
by W. W. Longfellow
Bear through sorrow, wrong, and ruth
In thy heart the dew of youth,
On thy lips the smile of truth
- Last seen 1 day ago. Member since September 11, 2008.
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, and quote is "i had a great christmas! but i wish i was jewish so i could celebrate hannukah.". - I am a 17 year old person (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm designing my master plan to bust out..
- I have 130 comments, 10 archived poems
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started out as a sonnet, but didn't work out that way in the end.86 words, 1 comment, November 11, 2008. In Advice.
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Inkling on November 13, 2008Thank you for signing my guest book~ So I'm signing yours now. o.o See you around, I guess.

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facethejam : hey on October 21, 2008hey thank you for your comment on my poem, dear god. i appreciate the two lines you especially liked-- i liked them too
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do you have any suggestions of how i could better it? changing adjs or verbs, restructuring of sentences? -
Brian Balzer : My Poetry Garden on September 19, 2008I don't know if I told you this but you were the first person I talked to out here. You were also the first one to read any of my poetry out here. I wanted to thank you because it was you that made me feel comfortable enough to begin posting my poetry. So I owe you a big thanks for encouraging me to start my Poetrt Garden here as sharepoetry. So you are the first person I am inviting to visit my homepage to visit and sign my guest book. Only one person has signed it so far. Too bad you couldn't have done that first too. Oh well, don't sweat the small stuff!
Read ya later,
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ckdals425 : Grace~ on September 15, 2008I'm glad I found out about this site. Now, I can read your poems...
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on Superman's Car by Windhover, on January 2i wish i was superman
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on Wait For Me by Miss O Malley, on December 29, 2008
Exactly
Why do we have to rush? I want to enjoy every moment, and if it was meant to be something more, it will happen when it's supposed to happen.
