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I'm a 13 year old girl from Canada! Eh?
Sorry, I JUST had to do that

Anyways, I'm not a professional poet or anything.
It's just something I do in my spare time (without the crap load of homework...)!

Other than writing poems, I play the guitar, bass and drums.

Well, I'm still in school and I'm learning poetry;
so some of my work may be from school, or just for fun.

Thanks for reading my extremely short bio - I'll add more later!

  • Last seen on Jul 31 11:05 PM. Member since February 12.
  • I am a 13 year old girl (Canada)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm A Student.
  • I have 8 comments, 8 archived poems

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  • on Escape. by CinfullyDelicious, on February 17

    Wow...

    Hehe, I liked this poem. It reminds me of how I used to space out in class at school

    I liked the beach part of poem - the imagery there was very good. I actually had an image of me sitting at the beach, sun and all...it was quite nice.

    I felt rested when I read this poem. It's very soothing and nice.

    Good job!

    . Rewarded 6

  • on Determination by Piano Guy, on February 16
    Well now, this is quite the interesting poem!

    All I can say is...I love it! I formed an imagery inside my head when I read it.

    The title states it all: Determination! I can feel the character and see that he's very determined to get to the top.

    I loved how you used the structure as well.

    In the poem, you tell the readers that the character is nearly lifeless and at the point of dying, yet at the end he's still alive and running.
    Keep it up,

    Sharon

    . Rewarded 8