I'm a student of the hopelessly unfocused random truths that show up in mundane details. I live my life, try to learn from it, and will generally show my true feelings to anyone who asks. Unless I'm feeling shy, which is often. Then I write it down.
- Member since January 13, 2007.
- I am a 26 year old woman (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm thinking about writing .
- I have 44 comments, 11 archived poems, 3 poems
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- New Love at allpoetry
This chair, old and worn and smelling like oak, so like your flesh hardening beneath my nose
My fingers find your tightest places and smoot - Nina at allpoetry
Nina’s hands shake when she goes outside.
Her body is a tool. - Undercurrents at allpoetry
He used to be my ocean
(a whisper)
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on What is a good poem? by NebulaeMoss, on February 28, 2007
You've both just made my day.
Thank you so much, Pie and Lad, your wonderful comments have literally brought tears to my eyes.
Lad, where do you see the knitting or weaving images? I'm curious, as that's not what I intended, although I certainly am a knitter, as I'm sure you can tell from my pic.
I'm just happy someone understood my poem! I feel like dancing now!
~Neb
So many good phrases in there...using commas to mean 'wait'...oh, just everything, hehehe!
~Neb