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Nickelspring

  • Member since January 14, 2009.
  • My mood is , and quote is "If you can dream it, write it.".
  • I am a 43 year old woman from South Carolina (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm contemplating life..
  • I have 2 comments, 143 poems, 3 stories, 4 journals

My other items

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  • Reserve.... at allpoetry
    I'll be back!!
  • Rebirth at allpoetry
    Boughs of deathly shadows
    left in dry abandon
  • My feet at allpoetry
    My feet are small and bare I know,
    my blisters take in stride,

My journal entries

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  • Bleakness of the Backyard
    February 1, Friends only.
  • My Conundrum
    My Conundrum 1 This morning, on the way to drop off my daughter off at school, we passed a gruesome sight- a cat squashed on the side of the road, its internal sundries spread several yards down the road. This kind of thing upsets me- puts a dark cloud on the day.  Besides being a cat lover (general anim
    October 1, 2009, In My own personal thoughts.  700 words. → 15 comments, Add one?
  • Food and other things for thought
    Chocolate chip and walnut (or pecan) pie…yup that feeds my thoughts.  Now I can concentrate on some ideas that have been swirling around my thoughts lately-- ideas that could be useful in future writing, or perhaps just introspection to help sort out me. 1 Heroes In one of those survey contests I’ve b
    August 26, 2009, In Noguest, Thoughts.  600 words. → 7 comments, Add one?

Guest Book

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  • Brian Balzer : Hello Nickelspring on January 14, 2009
    Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a smaller version of allpoetry, yet it is a rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. I have compiled a list of helpful hints I will send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you if you find them helpful and if you think of anything that could be added. Just a note, this is not an automated message. It is a personal welcome from a fellow poet. Welcome.
    Read ya 'round,
    BKB

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Comments

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  • on The Worlds Message by BJ Colvin, on January 15, 2009
    This is a nice message- all isn't lost. I like the repetition.
    KW~

    language: 3, rhythm: 2, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.

  • on The Seed by Brian Balzer, on January 15, 2009
    I really like evolution poems. This one expresses something most of us can relate to. I like your word choices that show so well the metamorphasis of the feelings that were experienced. It is interesting to take the first three lines and the last three lines and see the contrast the poem presents:
    "My feelings toward her
    were always so clear.
    It was love at first sight.
    The seed which was planted
    in my love for her had grown.
    It had become Hate.
    KW~