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Nienna Colle

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  • on Without A Spirit by Pretty Little Daisy, on February 12
    This is latent with tones of Eastern belief, and spirituality, and I find that beautiful. Your conveyance is likewise beautiful. Sufis believe that each heart is a cell in the heart of the divine (that which is everything), and all of one's experiences combined with everyone else's experiences, collectively, is one of the greatest forces on this and other planes of existence. Likewise, they believe that death is as natural as life; we live in the breath of the divine, and while we all inspire (or breathe in), it is also only natural--only right--that we breathe out as well (or, expire). The etymology supporting it is stunning to me. I'm very impressed with this write, whether you believe it or not (in regards to your response to Om); sometimes we are the vessels for something we don't quite grasp. Very well done.

    Nienna

  • on untitled by , on February 9
    touche, you sneaky irish man