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ObviouslyFineArt

  • Last seen on Sep 30 12:42 AM. Member since July 1.
  • When I'm not writing, I'm reading comic books..
  • I have 8 comments, 2 archived poems

My Poetry

  • a chill
    She smiles a smile / a tad remorse / the wind whispers softly / over her quiet yet / stinging speech / almost making the forest forget / her brutal betrayal of years past / she remembers / and she knows you do too / she's proud she can
    118 words, September 24
  • grains
    old man time / / his back aches / / he's tired and worn out / / he never gets a break / / the sun has risen / / but never set / / his day grows longer / / and longer / / never to cease / / he's tired / / n
    104 words, September 24
  • steps
    silver worlds in a soft universe / / ground that sinks beneath you feet / / pulling you into it's embrace / / warm, gentle, suffocating / / it feels so good / / numbed to danger / / drawn in by sweet caresses / / the air
    66 words, September 24

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  • on The Passing Alteration by RAWright, on September 24

    It stings

    That was beautiful, I wish I could say more apart from that and I'm sorry

  • on Bad Boy for Christmas by Windhover, on July 2
    Wow. I just stumbled across this, and it made my day! I know you wrote this ages ago, but man it was brilliant!