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okay. so my names adam-techno. I am a pretty cool guy. I have this secret though, that no body knows. so I'll put it on here. I want to be a singer. for real. I practice all the time. No, I'm not in choir. I'm self taught, or well, trying to be. no body evn know's what I sound like, I'm very self concious ...but this is really like my life long dream someday. If you were to hear me, I'm getting to develop a voice that sounds sorta like a mix between the frontmen of the bravery, the fray, and the strokes. I can sing any genre. I can sing "pain" "bed" from J holliday. yep. I'm even gonna take up smioking to enchance my voice. and yes, I know that that is bad. but....I love singing. so that is me.

  • Member since June 8, 2008.
  • I am a 17 year old guy from New Jersey (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm hanging around with freinds, just kickin it!.
  • I have 1 comment, 1 archived poem

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy : Welcome to Sharepoetry Adam-Techno on June 9, 2008
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  • on untitled by , on June 9, 2008

    tweak?

    yah, you may wanna tweak it, I can't exaclty find a consistent beat, but the subject is good, I like how it's described, maybe just spiffy up some stanza's