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  • on Only You by XExpressed LoveX, on July 11
    Short, sweet, and simple. SSS. The meaning is straight forward and lets the reader in on what is going on.

    One problem (which isn't that big of a deal), you put "your" when it should be "you're". It's a normal typo, so.

    Other than that, it's a nice read.
    Ashley

  • on Standing, Watching by BrokenHeartedSpirit, on July 11
    This is fast paced and exciting. The flow is nice and compliments the short use of lines. This creates a picture and that's always a ncie thing to have in your ind while reading someones work. People can relate to this too, so this is a good read.

    nicely done,
    Ashley