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Dun

Just spillin' the villain inside my head
unblacking blues that make me dead
and resting weary what I fear
writing rhymes into your ear










  • Last seen 4 hours ago. Member since February 17, 2006.
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Husband, Father and Commercial Construction Plumber.
  • I support the site as a silver member
  • I have 1,661 comments, 224 archived poems

My Poetry

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  • Quandary at storywrite
    My shoulders slump forward propelling head to hang, face flat with floor, elbows on knees and forehead braced along extended cup of forefinger riding ridge of brow as lines lap upward in distress. I am at a quandary and with
  • Cerebral Sheets at storywrite
    The mind is a fabric. Some chenille, some oxford cloth, some silk, satin and some fresh linen woven crisp with the tapestry of thought; clean and pressed yet effusing a warmth of well worn kinetic flux as flexes and flows of
  • Monument the Mighty at storywrite
    Pyramids, obelisks,1

Guest Book

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  • Dun : Hey thanks, LJ on April 14
    I'm excited for you and am sure you'll do great. And...if you don't right away, keep pluggin' until you do. I really enjoy your writing and have every faith that you'll succeed.

    your pal,

    al
  • ladyjanew : Hey AL! on March 23
    Just a quick note to let you know that I finally submitted some of my poetry for publication. I submitted to The Pedestal online magazine. I submitted Unrequited, Ode to Housework, Old People Rant, and Ode to 7th grade crush. I never had the balls to submit before, but I thought, what the hell? It can't hurt. Do you submit your poems for publication, AL? Yours are way better than mine. They should be published!
    Anyway, have a great Easter, and I'm reading more of your work. Keep up your great writing!
  • Dun : Guess what, gG? on March 8
    your comments put me over the edge so that the "show all" button appeared. When I clicked this button I found that I now have an option shown to delete. But you know what? I'm not gonna. I believe in showing things as they truly are and dealing with it. So it stays. So I'm a giant-ass-engendererer-of-teen-angst. So what?

    Thanks, gG.

    al
  • Dun : Hey gG on March 8
    Ohhh, thanks man. (sigh of relief)

    It's nice to see I'll not have an everlasting epitaph of assholery as my remembrance. Thanks, gG. I think the whole slash at the guestbook is an Allpoetry teen angst revenge thing, because I really don't understand why they didn't just respond to my comment on their poem page rather than bagging on me here in set-in-stone vitriol. Ahhh, so be it. I've often wondered why dave didn't remove the dumbass that slashed his guestbook. And now I understand. Although I wish I didn't. Ah, well...

    al

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  • on The Key To A Girl by cee, 4 hours ago

    Hey, this is funny.

    Women are strange creatures, but my wife has broken the code and divulged the secrets of you all, so now I'm savvy to you all's wonky ways.

    The number one thing I've learned after twelve years of marriage is: *trumpet fanfare* Don't try to fix her, just shut up and listen, letting her know from time to time that you are still listening by occasionally restating what it is you've just heard. Yep..women really are that easy to please. I think it's funny how we men primp and pose and do all sorts of antics when really all we needed was a set of ears.

    This was humorous with a snappy bit o fun stapled to it.

  • on Passport Declaration by Frank E Gibbard, 4 hours ago

    Ah yes...

    the dehumanizing process of putting on your best "no, I am not a mass-murderer terrorist" face and getting your freedom to see the rest of humanity with a minimalized modicum of threat as guaranteed by your "terrorist free" passport seal of approval. I feel you, frank. What a world we are living in. I like the beaten resignation that sings from this peace a desire for a better world.