- Last seen on Apr 2 3:54 AM. Member since August 18, 2005.
- I have 14 comments, 1 archived poem
My other items
1 - 3 of 127
Show all
- Vagabond at allpoetry
A misspelled signboard
does not mislead the vagabond, - Forbidden Fruit at allpoetry
Yellow suns
falls into oceans, - Old Man at allpoetry
Pencil's arthritis,
fruitless tennis elbow.
Guest Book
Comments
1 - 2 of 14
Show all
-
-
on A tree: Too young to die. Too old to cry. by The Pole Star, on May 21, 2006
Good!
The rhyming was a bit inconsistent. Here's a suggestion- fix a rhyming scheme for your poem.
This will make the poem come out nicely.
. Rewarded 1
YAY!
Bharat maata di Jai! Great tribute to your matribhoomi. You're a true patriot, for nothing else could have inspired such a beautiful poem.. Rewarded 4