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Raichel• Show poetry

~About me--I think too much, some people say. I think a lot into politics, religion, people. My teacher's say I'll do good in life. I have very strong opinions. If you would ever like to talk about something with me, then go ahead. I will never put down anyones thoughts, I will simply tell them mine as well and see what they think. I enjoy hearing people's opinions, whether I agree or not. People tell me Im a very stubborn, indipendent person. Yet, I care very much for people's feelings. I care about everyone, whether I know them or not, or if they don't care about me, or even if I've never met them. For some reason, I care. I'm sensitive only if a dear friend or family member purposly offends me, other than that, I am quite strong (emotionally.)

~About my poems--I tend to write about things that I'm thinking about. Never will I post a poem that is about me. I may, every once in awhile, post one about a family member. But the poems, "suicide" and "alone" are simply poems that I made up.

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  • on Alone by Raichel, on October 2, 2007

    thank you

    I'll see more into how I can break down the poem. I'll re-writ eit on soem paper and see how I can organize that. Thanks for the tip and taking the time to comment this =]

  • on Alone by Raichel, on October 2, 2007

    thanks

    for taking the time to analize my poem and comment it. And, I'm not taking any "mini-steps." I've been writing since I was eleven, this poem was written when I was thirteen. I'm working on more stuff right now. But, thank you. I looked at what you were talking about, how I should get rid of the last six lines, but no thanks. I like it the way it is. I see what you mean in line thirty-two though, I'll try and figure something out to fix that. Thanks again =]