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EGGS & TACOS ARE AMAZING!!!!

There is a reason why rap rhymes with crap

The system is corrupt....though it has helped me...just a little...maybe a lot

"To give pleasure to a single heart, by a single act, is better than a thousand heads bowing in prayer." - Ghandi

I'm 16, but will be 17 in close to two months.
My name is Courtney
I live in Kansas
I am of some sorts an addict
I am a Lesbian
I love drawing, writing, and taking pitures.
I have calico colored hair, very short
2 months and 10 days before my B-day....THE COUNTDOWN BEGINS...

I miss the people who cared about me in my addiction, and I apologize to them for the hurt I caused them in it......I miss the people who care about me out of my addiction...I apologize for who I was....I apologize it took so long for ne to change....

Bands I'm into & My Favorite songs by them:
She Wants Revenge - These Things
Tool - All of them
Korn - Liar
System of A Down - Tentative
Atreyu - Bleeding Mascara
Angels & Airwaves - Not Sure
Flyleaf - Fully Alive
Otep - Blood pigs
Saliva - Click Click Boom
Incubus - Pardon Me
Trapt - Headstrong
SPM - You know my name
Tech N9ne - T9x
A7X - Afterlife
Blessthefall - Guys Like You Make Us Look Bad
Rise against - All
Theory of A Deadman - Santa Monica
Bullet For My Valentine - All around me
Coheed & Cambria - Feathers
Sum 41 - We're all to blame
Crossfade - Already gone
Metallica - The memory remains
Sixx: AM - Life is beautiful

  • Last seen on May 20 11:46 AM. Member since April 21.
  • I am a 16 year old woman from Kansas (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm rehabilitating.
  • I have 15 comments, 5 archived poems

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  • shadow2050 : Hwy Whats up!!!!!!! on May 10
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    Have a rose buddy talk to you later girl.
  • Post-Mortem : HEY HEY HEY !!!! on April 24
    you should sooooooooo be my freind, like, you don't understand!!

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  • on Cancel you out. by MaMa-2-be-Cindy, on May 20
    I like it...it was short and to the point...you decided what was going to happen or at least the person who was talking was going to decide what was going to be the conclusion of this....you put emotion into this poem at certain points in this piece of work....I got the feeling of being lost at the beginning then it went to more of a controlling and resentment type of feeling...you did great though...love your writes....

    . Rewarded 8

  • on This is what it feels like to be dead ( my suicidal saturday )5/3/08 by SYmPtOm.QuEeR., on May 20
    i think that you did really good....more in the sense that I'm not really saying much because I said most of it already..and I really don't know what to say if you really want the truth....