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Robin Greene

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  • Naked and Free at allpoetry
    I'm sure I read it right
    We're as naked as can be
  • Sleep Now Stranger at allpoetry
    Sleep now stranger
    In eternal peace
  • Mystery Man at allpoetry
    To me the man who changed my life
    Is an eternal mystery

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  • Brian Balzer : Hi Robin! on September 19, 2008
    I came to read more of your work. I enjoyed your comment on The Christmas Surprise. I would be not only delighted but also honored if you sent it to family and friends. What a wonderful compliment that would be!
    Thans again.
    BKB

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  • on The Science of Affairs by iphios, on October 4, 2008

    Excellent

    I like it, the layout suits what you have written.

    language: 4, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 3.

  • on Keep in Touch by samets3, on October 4, 2008

    Different

    Strange in an enjoyable way, not sure about the uneven verses though, on the other hand it is unique.

    language: 3, rhythm: 2, subject: 3, tone: 3, form: 3.