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RuLives4GodOnly

  • Member since December 15, 2006.
  • I am a 16 year old woman from Florida
  • When I'm not writing, I'm getting closer to Jesus.
  • I have 6 comments, 3 archived poems

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  • on Stuck in the middle by Keaton Banks, on October 10, 2007
    Very nice and quite abstract. I like that in a poem. What really struck me though was this line here: "I see fluttering losses, cold flames".
    That's kins=da a paradox cuz flames can't be coold! All in all though, I really liked it! Nothing to change.

  • on untitled by , on October 7, 2007
    First off let me just say: SUICIDE IS NOT THE ANSWER TO YOUR MANY TEENAGE PROBLEMS! Trust me, I know how it feels to want to curl up and die. Dicentergrating in the Earth forgetting the problems of this world, this present time. But THAT is not the answer! You have so much to live for! Can't you see that?