HELLO ALL YOU PEOPLE FROM SHAREPOETRY!!!! (I JUST MOVED TO AMERICA)(AGAIN).
I'M SACHIRO K. AND I'M IN LOVE WITH EMO GUYS NOW!!!! I'VE SEEN AMERICAN EMOS, AND THEY.....ARE.....HOTT!!! NOW I HAVE MY VERY OWN, AND HE'S SO CUTE HIS NAME IS TYLER.!!!!!!!!!!
member since: 5-2-2008 last update: 5-28-2008
I manage and drum for a band. we're called 4 3vuR g0N. we don't have any of our music on any website but i was planning to go to battle of the "new" bands....just to see how good we are(not).
Ashley "Kisses" Hartloche-lead guitar
Sarah "Sachiro" Karietsu-drums manager
Tyler "wakoo" Dervenstein-singer
Michael "papa" Oveland-bass
I'm a 18 year old girl that loves music.... don't really care what country it comes from as long as it's good to listen to. Some of my favorite things to do are: Skateboard, drawing, writing poetry, reading, and playing soccer. I'd have to say that poetry is one of my weaker points and something that i definately want to improve on. Poetry is a big part of my life and it helps me see that all things in life a worth something, even if others doubt the value of something.
"a man walks along the road, holding a carboard box. he sets on the side and walks away. The man stands up straight and says "there you have it you ugly mutt. now you're free to ruin someone elses beautiful life!" the man walks away, down the road and disappears."
----Sachiro K (me)----
this little snip-it is an example of how people somethimes don't care about things that they have. sad but true. i think everything in life has it's own beauty even if it is ugly. there's always a way to find the inner beauty....always.
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Hope that all of you enjoy having me around. it's not everyday that your surrounded (hypothetically speaking) by people that love the same thing that you do, poetry. If you all love my poetry then you should check out my AP page too ^^. if there were any other poetry web pages connected to AP, i would take them over.....NOW!!!!
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you know what i hate.....NOTHING!! (except preps....oh god do i hate them, they're not even human!!).
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If you got this far on my page, i'm surprised you're even still reading because i just found out like two seconds ago that i was really really random...hope you don't mind to much people of SP. "i used to think that i was crazy until the little voices in my head said i wasn't" ----Sachiro K's motto.
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If you guys ever wanted to know what my favorite bands or foods or people are, all that good junk like that is on my AP page....seriously i have way too much crap that i like. i'm way too optimistic sometimes and it's really annoying.....i think that i'm just rambling on and on about nothing too important, so i'll stop now.... ^^" sorry for all the randomocity.
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ONE QUESTION FOR ALL OF YOU OUT THERE THAT LIKE TO PUT UR BRAIN TO THE TEST (OR FOR ALL OF YOU WHO DON'T)....I WANNA KNOW SOMETHING, "IS THERE SUCH A THING AS PREDICTABLE RANDOMOCITY?"
ANSWER THIS FOR ME BY P.M.ING ME OR BY SAYING IT IN A REPLY IN MY GUESTBOOK (WHICH EVER ROASTS YOUR MARSHMELLOWS).....
THANK YOU (ONLY GET A "THANK YOU" IF YOU REPLY, THOUGH).
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Hmmm.....now I'm stuck because i don't have a topic to write about. *sigh* oh well I guess....OOOOOOOOOO wait!! I have another question for you people out there, do you guys find me annoyingly random, stupidly random, or just random....??
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this is the evil bunny!! help him dominate Sharepoetry!!!! copy him and paste him onto your author page....(you'd also be helping someone to start a random revolution....i think).
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guess wut you guys......i'm bored....and i really would like somefeed back on some of my poems. i want to know how to make them better. poetry is definatly something i want to improve on. i've never been really good on writing things, and always have troubles in my writing classes because i just can't grasp meanings of things.
so please....please leave helpful comments, and helpful thoughts on my poetry please.
member since: 5-2-2008 last update: 5-28-2008
I manage and drum for a band. we're called 4 3vuR g0N. we don't have any of our music on any website but i was planning to go to battle of the "new" bands....just to see how good we are(not).
Ashley "Kisses" Hartloche-lead guitar
Sarah "Sachiro" Karietsu-drums manager
Tyler "wakoo" Dervenstein-singer
Michael "papa" Oveland-bass
I'm a 18 year old girl that loves music.... don't really care what country it comes from as long as it's good to listen to. Some of my favorite things to do are: Skateboard, drawing, writing poetry, reading, and playing soccer. I'd have to say that poetry is one of my weaker points and something that i definately want to improve on. Poetry is a big part of my life and it helps me see that all things in life a worth something, even if others doubt the value of something.
"a man walks along the road, holding a carboard box. he sets on the side and walks away. The man stands up straight and says "there you have it you ugly mutt. now you're free to ruin someone elses beautiful life!" the man walks away, down the road and disappears."
----Sachiro K (me)----
this little snip-it is an example of how people somethimes don't care about things that they have. sad but true. i think everything in life has it's own beauty even if it is ugly. there's always a way to find the inner beauty....always.
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Hope that all of you enjoy having me around. it's not everyday that your surrounded (hypothetically speaking) by people that love the same thing that you do, poetry. If you all love my poetry then you should check out my AP page too ^^. if there were any other poetry web pages connected to AP, i would take them over.....NOW!!!!
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you know what i hate.....NOTHING!! (except preps....oh god do i hate them, they're not even human!!).
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If you got this far on my page, i'm surprised you're even still reading because i just found out like two seconds ago that i was really really random...hope you don't mind to much people of SP. "i used to think that i was crazy until the little voices in my head said i wasn't" ----Sachiro K's motto.
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If you guys ever wanted to know what my favorite bands or foods or people are, all that good junk like that is on my AP page....seriously i have way too much crap that i like. i'm way too optimistic sometimes and it's really annoying.....i think that i'm just rambling on and on about nothing too important, so i'll stop now.... ^^" sorry for all the randomocity.
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ONE QUESTION FOR ALL OF YOU OUT THERE THAT LIKE TO PUT UR BRAIN TO THE TEST (OR FOR ALL OF YOU WHO DON'T)....I WANNA KNOW SOMETHING, "IS THERE SUCH A THING AS PREDICTABLE RANDOMOCITY?"
ANSWER THIS FOR ME BY P.M.ING ME OR BY SAYING IT IN A REPLY IN MY GUESTBOOK (WHICH EVER ROASTS YOUR MARSHMELLOWS).....
THANK YOU (ONLY GET A "THANK YOU" IF YOU REPLY, THOUGH).
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Hmmm.....now I'm stuck because i don't have a topic to write about. *sigh* oh well I guess....OOOOOOOOOO wait!! I have another question for you people out there, do you guys find me annoyingly random, stupidly random, or just random....??
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this is the evil bunny!! help him dominate Sharepoetry!!!! copy him and paste him onto your author page....(you'd also be helping someone to start a random revolution....i think).
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guess wut you guys......i'm bored....and i really would like somefeed back on some of my poems. i want to know how to make them better. poetry is definatly something i want to improve on. i've never been really good on writing things, and always have troubles in my writing classes because i just can't grasp meanings of things.
so please....please leave helpful comments, and helpful thoughts on my poetry please.
- Last seen on Aug 20 5:30 PM. Member since May 2.
- I am a 18 year old girl from Washington (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm skateboarding, reading, drawing, playing soccer, or drumming.
- I have 14 comments, 7 archived poems
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Sachiro k-Saruto : thank you for the guestbook add Papyrus!!! on May 16hey emo guys may be whiners, but they're really nice. i just got my own a couple days back.....his name is tyler...and oh my god, he loves life, and he's trying not to be "too" emo. he loves my happy poems over my sad poems, he says they're too depressing.
^^ emos are so adorable!!!!
you just gotta know how to get them out of their slumps. he loves my enthusiasm, and how i'm almost never depressed!!! to tyler: *love you tyler* -
Papyrus : never judge a guy by his eye shadow and skinny jeans! on May 16SKS,
haha. emo guys are for AP. and no, you don't want your own. they whine too much about how their lives suck. and their poetry is even worse.
now u know the truth.
Pap
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skipeople : Welcome to SP! on May 2Glad to chat, help, of be ignored. Which ever may flip your pancakes!
Ashley
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on Let Me Pretend (Stop Telling Me) by DarknessOfSanity, on May 21
wow
okay, first off,i'd like to say that the repetition is very cool. it adds character to the poem and makes it more interesting.
pretending can be a good thing sometimes, but if you get lost in that make believe world you'll get stuck and struggle to reconnect with reality.
but you never have to listen to anyone....just do as you please, i'll still <3 you even though you do something that i think is stupid.
the only thing that i would consider changing would be the last stanza because it's less lines.....it kinda conflicts with the rest of the stanzas because they have more lines.
but you don't have to listen to me!!!!
i don't know much!!
love it
Sachiro k ^^
oh wow
this is totally better than the suicide poem that i wrote about my friend Bobby. i love how you ask all those questions in the poem, it makes it a worth while read. i even tried to answer those questions myself....great job on this poem. did you show that persons sister the poem?
did she read it?
i hope she's done with her suicidal ways.
thank you for the read
Sachiro k