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Saddest.Soul

  • Member since May 21, 2009.
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  • on my lost madonna by Kiddy, on June 2, 2009
    'Feeling forbidden' 'dither to decide' - oh wow the words alliterate without any effort. Hey Kiddy, you didn't seem to be forcing the words to rhyme. Awesome.

  • on The Lonely Voyager by badmashabhi, on June 2, 2009
    THis is the second poem I read about loneliness here. This is different from the former one I read. I liked this optimistic poem.
    You used very simple yet great words here.

    -SS