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OVER You

Your boring me to death / Hear my heartbeat stop / Second, hours, minutes / Falling off the clock / Taking on your words / In a jumbled, tangled mess / Falling on deaf ears / God give it a rest / I'm already such a mess / I don't need yo

53 words, 2 comments, March 19. In Personal, Thoughts, Spoken, True
Remembering Him

211 words, 8 comments, March 9. In Sad, Personal, Rant, Pain, Angst, Life, Love, Thoughts
Fade Away

I made you promise not to try / So I guess this makes me a hypocrite / Because truth be told / I'm not made of stone / I'm broken glass at

114 words, 3 comments, February 18. In Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Angst

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Pretty Little Daisy on March 12

Haha, I like your picture.
Truthful Sinner on March 11

keep up the good writing
SecretKeeper365 : So after a forever time of not being able to write.... on November 4, 2009

I'm BACK!!!!

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on Some day I will forget you by alex89, 2 days ago
Okay I love the message with this, but it has a lot of spelling mistakes
on Closed Inside by Linze, on March 19

Idk
For something that seems really personal it's kind of formal. I also think that some of your sentences are not needed and throw the whole thing off...