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  • A Narrative... at storywrite
    The sun’s majesty breaks through the clouds of this evening’s failing light, each ray seeming to reach forever into the sky, holding onto the hope of keeping it day. Dusk’s gradual coming prevails as the sun loses its grip o

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  • Twilight Saga
    The Twilight Saga sucks. Plain and simple. I am fascinated, however, at how many teeny-boppers have fallen so in love with a terrible story. I suppose the fact that they're actually reading is a good thing, but why couldn't they find good books, you know, like Ann Rice, the queen of vampires. As I tried to read H
    March 9, 400 words. → 19 comments, Add one?
  • Alexander the Great...Some Thoughts
    There was a man who once lived, a king who ruled justly and mercifully, a conqueror who decided it best to unite all peoples and give everything he took back to the people. Alexander the Great, we call him now, an almost mythological figure who rose above the petty differences of people and through his wars and
    March 8, 1,900 words. → 10 comments, Add one?
  • Dearest Romeo
    Thy words bestow, enchantments on my heart, My Romeo, thy heart is to be mine ‘lone. I am thine, seeking our fam’lies departure They wouldst leave not, if hence our love was known, O’ fair man you are, eyes blue as the sea Amidst your strong arms I find myself lost Thine heart touches me, take mine my trust
    March 4, 200 words. → Make first comment?

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  • on Broken by SweetAngelKitten, on October 24, 2007

    Brokenness

    The brokenness in this piece lends itself to be cried over, a sharp, searing pain so recent that we still cower in the corner afraid of our own shadows. Fears that once consumed us were washed away with this person and now return with force, bringing with it a sense of total loss and hopelessness... This is beautifully written and simple in text, very easy to understand and to feel what you feel. Great writing.

    Robert

  • on Fallen Angel by skipeople, on September 26, 2006
    Understandable, take care and I wish you a great day!

    ~Robert