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Silver Spirit

I'm an English student who specialises in creative writing. This doesn't make me good but I'm hoping to improve!

I are serious poet!

  • Last seen 1 day ago. Member since August 9, 2005.
  • I am a 22 year old woman (Great Britain)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a lazy student.
  • I have 72 comments, 27 archived poems

My Poetry

  • He takes me, one vast hand / splayed like starfish on blazing breast, / stealing my heat so he melts into my skin / and I can only feel the pressure / of his fingers clasping, / Scalding breath on my neck and / Oh! / / He winds the windo
    106 words, 5 comments, October 26, 2007
  • “A poem must mean something,” you say / “Isn’t that what it’s all about?” / Must it? / “I mean, you must be talking about someone.” / Must
    155 words, 4 comments, May 6, 2007
  • 169 words, 7 comments, April 9, 2007

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  • He is not a poem at allpoetry
    “God, I am not a poem!” He says.
    Oh, but you are.

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  • on Breakfast Scene by Silver Spirit, on October 26, 2007

    Humble Thanks

    I'm glad you liked this one, and no, what a foolish thought. Of course I don't study! I actually didn't like this one so much, I never thought my use of such concrete imagery suited me but I am glad you enjoyed it.
    I'm back!

    Your nonsensical nemesis!

    Silver spirit!

  • on Meaning Nothing by Silver Spirit, on October 16, 2007

    Thankyou Lad

    I apologise for the late reply but I have had somewhat of a hiatus from Sharepoetry owing to my vast amount of uni work.

    As to your comment, I am honoured that you think so highly of it, and believe me such praise from you is gladly and humbly recieved. I must give credit to my adversary, the Worthy Bird below for help with the formatting as my skill in that was somewhat lacking.

    I am in total agreement about "meaning" in poetry. I have modest assumptions about my own verse yet this one I feel is one of my best.

    Once again, I thankyou for the kind words Lad

    Yours

    Silver Spirit