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Silver Spirit

I'm an English student who specialises in creative writing. This doesn't make me good but I'm hoping to improve!

All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.
Oscar Wilde (1854 - 1900)

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  • He is not a poem at allpoetry
    “God, I am not a poem!” He says.
    Oh, but you are.

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  • kittyeaglepig : jamesons on July 11, 2009
    *slurs*

    write some jollity PpPppP
  • StarsAreFlying : hello on March 13, 2009
    hello how are u?

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  • on Sea Lady by Silver Spirit, on October 22, 2009
    Thankyou very much!

  • on What is really lost by kittyeaglepig, on August 10, 2009
    I do like this poem, it's a snippit of a thought in itself and the image it creates is beautiful.

    One suggestion, "Oft" is a fairly old fashioned word, and I personally don't feel it fits with the rest of the poem. It also throws the line out a bit.

    Yahtzee!