Hello. My name is Alexis Castle—nice to meet you. I am here because I love to write. It may be very rare that you find one of my poems sounding anything like a traditional poem really; that is just my opinion of course. I love to state the thoughts in my head and capture my perspective with a pen. Writing has always been my cure and my challenge. Therefore I would love for you to constructively critique my writings and question what you may.
- Member since January 19, 2009.
- My mood is
, and quote is "eccentric". - I am a 18 year old girl from Kentucky (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm working, watching movies, playing the piano, or painting..
- I have 10 comments, 3 archived poems
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Brian Balzer on January 19, 2009Welcome to sharepoetry. This is a small, yet rapidly growing community of talented poets. Most of the folks here are fairly friendly most of the time. If you have any questions feel free to holler. I'm happy to help anytime I can. Enjoy your stay. I have compiled a list of helpful hints I will send to you that would help explain a few things. They explain the point system and how to win a free membership and things like that. Let me know if you if you find them helpful and if you think of anything that could be added. Just a note, this is not an automated message. It is a personal welcome from a fellow poet. Welcome.
Read ya 'round,
BKB
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on The Sickness by NoEscapingTheWall, on January 20, 2009This poem really stands out to me. I have been diagnosed with a lot of things and I love the way you explain the "sickness" and the way society seems to look at mental illnesses. You captured great emotion here. Ha I love the dirty underwear statement! I love the bottle of scotch. It all works out very well and flows so nicely. You're first line is very catchy and it makes me want to read more. I really enjoyed this write!
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on A Serial Artisan by confusedviking, on January 20, 2009"The first wound grabs your attention"
I love that. It goes along so nicely with what this poem is about. This poem is very interesting. It does not say what the issue is yet allows the readers mind to wonder in a good way. You used very good word-usage in this poem and I really enjoyed reading it. I really like the title as well. The end is excellent if I do say so myself. Ending it with a question is honestly a great way to end it. The Freudian theories is an awesome way to look at it.
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