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  • on Post Script by DoubleUkL, on December 18, 2005
    It might just be me, but I dont know why you started the poem with "and" but, its your poem and you can do whaever you want with it. A few grammer mistakes also. But good work!

    language: 3, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 3.

  • on I miss You by DoubleUkL, on December 18, 2005
    Beautiful work, really astounding!! I'm sorry for your pain, and I bet if they read this, they would come back to you, that is. if you wanted them to.

    language: 5, rhythm: 3, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 3.