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Twila-

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  • How.
    I need to tell you the truth. 1 I fucking hate you. I hate all of you. I hate how you tore my heart from my scarred chest and smashed it to the ground before me. How could you leave me when I was at my most vulnerable point? How could you not hear me screaming at you, pleading for you to stay? The door still hold
    October 11, 2009, In Angst, My own personal thoughts, Spur of the moment.  400 words. → Make first comment?

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  • maxswift on October 26, 2009
    lets get married sometime...whenever you're not busy.
  • maxswift on October 24, 2009
    a'oeiriuhg'ooarh'[goub'[oruebg'ouerg[foqn[r5g9u8h13=4-8yh[qg3ntv-8y34t43tvin-238tyv....back at yaa!
  • maxswift on October 22, 2009
    i can deal with that...and yess we should. this site need our spamming.
  • maxswift on October 22, 2009
    you're poetry is as gorgeous as you are...fuck it, you're magic. haa

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  • on Starve. by Twila-, on February 8
    Thank you, Daniel.. that stanza was also my favorite. All of my poems are becoming increasingly personal and I really dont like it, but I'm glad that you enjoy them. I hate feeling pain and I hate being hurt but I always feel a sense of relief when I write out my pain in these words, and it means a lot more when someone can relate or leaves a rewarding comment such as this. It is much appreciated.
    Take care. Hugs.


    Twi.

  • on Drift. by Pretty Little Daisy, on February 6
    hi Krista...

    This was really good. Very descriptive and I found myself wanting to read it again... I felt the emotions that you explained.

    Imbedded should be embedded.
    Craddled should be cradled.