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'ello, My name isn't important. I strive to capture the uncaged emotions and show them to the world. Find the words, if there are any to share love, ease pain and remember adventures. I live for now and die for forever.
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I'm a redhead (gold/brown red not orange) I'm little (short (5' 3") and skinny (105) I usually have my face in a book (I got hit by a bus at shool while doing so) but I'm loud and opinionated. I live with my father (stoner!) and have lots of friends who love me. I dislike hypocrites, bigots, sexists and Racists, and hate (I word I don't use often) my mother..I'm an agnostic and if god did happen to appear to me I would try and kill him.
I love pretty much everybody unless they do something to make me feel otherwise.
'ello, My name isn't important. I strive to capture the uncaged emotions and show them to the world. Find the words, if there are any to share love, ease pain and remember adventures. I live for now and die for forever.
Basic image:
I'm a redhead (gold/brown red not orange) I'm little (short (5' 3") and skinny (105) I usually have my face in a book (I got hit by a bus at shool while doing so) but I'm loud and opinionated. I live with my father (stoner!) and have lots of friends who love me. I dislike hypocrites, bigots, sexists and Racists, and hate (I word I don't use often) my mother..I'm an agnostic and if god did happen to appear to me I would try and kill him.
I love pretty much everybody unless they do something to make me feel otherwise.
- Member since April 17, 2007.
- I am a 17 year old person (United States)
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on untitled by , on May 7, 2007
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A bit awkward but ok, it reminds me of "The Old Woman Who Swallowed a Fly." You build up nicely but it is a bit weird in rhythm.language: 4, rhythm: 2, subject: 3, tone: 3, form: 3.
Nice
You could probably make this an excellent poem if you work on it. I really understand where you are comming from and I know its no fun being used but hey be independent, you don't need another person to make you whole.