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Hello I'm Lori a Senior at LHHS, I'm 18 and i'm from Pennsylvinia. I enjoy playing guitar and keyboard, now i'm teaching myself to play bass. I skateboard...but I suck. I like to act stupid with and without my friends. I've been writing poetry for 6yrs. My poetry comes from my emotions and or mood. People told me how much my poetry relates to them in real life problems. Well I love Photography more then anything. After I graudate I will be attending Pittsburgh Art Institute. I've been in photography all my life. " Not Completed."




This is one of my Bests Friends Brooklyn "AKA" Diana, Her Poems are amazing. You got to read them for yourself. I love them and I know you will too. Just click the link and read them for yourself.
http://allpoetry.com/NewYorker


This is Amanda, She is one of my Friends. I understand her poems,I usually always will. Her poems will like change you. She is a really Excellent Poet. Her poems are Amazing, just click the link and read them for yourself. http://allpoetry.com/Mrs%20Captain%20Sparrow


This is AJ, one of my other friends on here. He is really nice to everyone. And his poems are amazing. Just check them out, click the link below
http://allpoetry.com/XendlessloveX

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  • on Rain by NewYorker, on April 17, 2007

    Good

    Good

    language: 4, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.

  • on The Sapphire Glimmer by XendlessloveX, on April 17, 2007

    Cool

    Brooklyns right...this could be made into a song. The flow of the poetry and the rythm and verse seem to intwined together. I enjoyed reading this poem. When you get a chance...I just now posted a new poem/song....if you would care to read it.

    always
    Loreale

    aka:

    "Brandi"

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 4, form: 4.