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Zephra Keyes

  • Last seen on Oct 26 1:35 PM. Member since January 4, 2006.
  • My mood is , and quote is "thoughtful".
  • I am a woman
  • When I'm not writing, I'm daydreaming or editing.
  • I have 102 comments, 21 archived poems

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  • Glass cages at allpoetry
    I sit, enclosed in glass
    Observing; Voices
  • Hauntings at allpoetry
    In the moonlight, she stood still
    Facing the ghosts that haunted her...
  • He said I couldn't. So I did. at storywrite
    He said I couldn’t, so I did.
    It was bright, like any other sunny March day in Tamil Nadu. First, I’d traveled eight hours over-night, by train, from Chennai to get to Tanjo

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  • on untitled by , on October 22
    I like how vivid this is...

    Particularly like "through the mosquito netting
    scrambling the words
    on the detective novel I was reading"... guess we've all had moments like this one

    "your feelings surrounding you
    like a luminous slice
    you fill in the space
    with a plan" got me thinking of how many people forget the spaces... After all, without those, we'd all just be a jumble of chaos, wouldn't we?

    Hope I haven't gone off on my own trip.. Think I get the sense of what you mean here.. that sometimes impressions last.. and last.. but then again, i could be wrong.. all I know is, I enjoyed it thanks for the read

    . Rewarded 8

  • on Write me by Windhover, on October 21

    love it!

    Drama, Drama, Drama... the perfect welcome back for me, even if u didn't mean it that way And while I think I get what you're talking about, I have no idea why I'm suddenly craving a warm brownie, oozing with goooey dark chocolate sauce! hmm...