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As Salaam Alaikum (peace be upon you)









Thanks for dropping by my page. I hope you find something interesting in it… well to start with a lil about me

My name is Abdulla Zakir and I am from Bahrain which is a very small country in Middle East may be the smallest but it is a beautiful and literally hot place to live.





Poetry is something I took on as a hobby and I enjoy writing poems, It is very relaxing and way out of my daily life boredom. Each of my poems tells something about my personality the bad and the good. But rarely any of them are related with my life… I just write poems on most random things. I have great friends and a greater family… I respect family values and I think I am kind of old school person.





When I write poems I usually write poems for others or for the readers, what’s the point of a poem if its only me who is gonna read it.. I just write for the fun of writing not for money or for fame but I wouldn’t mind giving some beautiful poems to the world to read.. for that I would try harder every time. I really like when someone likes my poem and if it brings the essence for which the poem is written for.. then the goal of that poem is achieved. This is all also what inspires me… the reader’s reactions good and bad. Enough of my crap, lets read some of my poems

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    Was there a bird like a nightingale?
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  • on Halloween Mischief by richard314, on October 24, 2009
    this is a lovely poem and a great riddle... is the answer 72?

    This is very well written. i don't have any critique and i feel the poem is great as it is. If i had to write this poem i would have written it lil differently. made it longer using lot of prepositions and articles.
    but i don't think it would end up this great.


    language: 4, rhythm: 3, subject: 4, tone: 4, form: 4.

  • on We Sailed on With Happy Hearts by richard314, on October 23, 2009
    I don't have any critique. this is beautifully written villanelle. i could see what you meant in your comment. i will try to work on it according to your advise.

    language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 3, tone: 4, form: 5.