hey my name's mike. i'm 20 and i love poetry especially revolving around love. that is pretty much all i do write about lol. i have been writing since my first heart break, and have loved doing it since for fun/therepy. i just want a chance to gain feedback on my work both positive and negative...my style i guess is unique in some aspecs. i dont bother with puncuation or rhyming at all. everything i write comes from the heart...i would say im a pretty deep person at times. being someone so shy, writing is my way of speaking out and shareing my feelings. i've had a rough life, and my poetry is the result of it.
- Member since September 3, 2008.
- I am a 20 year old guy from Ohio (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm listening to music and trying to live a good life.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/shy_guy101
- I have 6 comments, 4 archived poems
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on The End by -CrimsonTears-, on March 30, 2009haha this is different
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on Great... by Brian Balzer, on September 13, 2008this is a good example of what poetry should sound like. most peoples poems who try to rhyme always turn out worse. cause they're sacrifficing the messege in order to have rhyme and patterns. you did a good job on keeping both intact while writing. you get the messege, and the enjoyment of a poem that can rhyme at the same time...my style you see isnt anything like this lol. if anything its unorthodox, but thats just me writing my feelings out straight from the mind lol
