hey my name's mike. i'm 19 and i love poetry.(obviously if i'm here lol.) especially revolving around love. that is pretty much all i do write about lol. i have been writing since my first heart break, and have loved doing it since for fun/therepy. i just want a chace to gain feedback on my work both positive and negative...my style i guess is unique in some aspecs. i dont bother with puncuation or rhyming at all. everything i write comes from the heart...i would say im a pretty deep person at times. being someone so shy, writing is my way of speaking out and shareing my feelings. i've had a rough life, and my poetry is the result of it.
- Last seen on Nov 9 1:22 AM. Member since September 3.
- I am a 19 year old guy from Ohio (United States)
- When I'm not writing, I'm listening to music and trying to live a good life.
- Visit my homepage at www.myspace.com/shy_guy101
- I have 5 comments, 1 archived poem
My Poetry
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i wish u where here / / right next to me / / and to know u are there for me / / to see ur beautiful smile everyday / / to have it directed towards me / / i hope to find you someday / / i want to share my love with you /173 words, September 21. In love, loneliness
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i still shed tears for you / / i cant help but wish you where still here / / ever since you left us our lives have never been the same / / especially for me / / i needed you the most when you passed away / / every boy needs a fath326 words, 1 comment, September 13
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here we go again / the tears fall once more / the source is our good friend loneliness / though i've no one in mind / i wish to get that chance / to meet that one special soul for once / t486 words, September 7. In love, loneliness
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on Great... by Brian Balzer, on September 13this is a good example of what poetry should sound like. most peoples poems who try to rhyme always turn out worse. cause they're sacrifficing the messege in order to have rhyme and patterns. you did a good job on keeping both intact while writing. you get the messege, and the enjoyment of a poem that can rhyme at the same time...my style you see isnt anything like this lol. if anything its unorthodox, but thats just me writing my feelings out straight from the mind lol
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on Melody by MissingTheRain, on September 13this kind of reminds me of my first kiss except im the guy writing about it lol...anywho i really like ur style, short but very sweet. keep it up, ur good lol
ps thanks for the comment
