Adorasmum at Share Poetry

I sing when I am sad.

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Love at allpoetry
To love is to lose your autonomy and become whole.
Take a walk with me at allpoetry
As we embark on this epic journey / As you slip your hand in mine / I will walk step mirroring your step / And support you when you may lose your balance / This road will be frought with difficuty / We will fal
[ Death knell and my fate is sealed ] at allpoetry
Death knell and my fate is sealed / A dead father / A mother drowned in tears / An aeroplane of adventure, foreign smells invade my centre-England!!!! / I came from good stock, I was friend to all / I came from gra

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on The Love Poem of Mr. Hyde by Windhover, on April 25
W, I liked the theme of this poem, it encapsulated the urgency and desire and danger that Mr Hyde would possess. There are several different factors being dealt with, the passion, the fact that women love a 'bad boy', but also the nature of Dr J, that all the malenolent parts of the human self is borne out in MrHyde.

I liked the subject matter alot. As to the content. I liked the beginning. However, I wasnt sure about the simplicity of phrase to end the poem. I thought that in keeping with the rest of the poem, the last line could have been more descriptive, you seemed spent by the last line. Perhaps the words 'the most dangerous love poem ever written' is too bland in comparison to the rest of the poem.

Despite the above, I liked it a great deal.
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on Moonlight Nymph by iphios, on April 21
The passion in the piece had a richness that I liked. It seemed like more than the gentle musings on the moon but about someone real and breathing rather than a myth. Each line was a pleasure thrilling the reader. Nice work as usual.