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Agendasuicide

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  • In the Finding Of
    Oh, in the sweet seduction of your lips / Blessed by the serenity of your kiss / Oh, in this trice of serendipity / Fortune is lost on all,
    206 words, 1 comment, October 24, 2009
  • Doubt
    You can't do this, / you can't do that, / you will fall flat. / Pay no mind, / these are those, / that quit the grind. / If you breathe, / you can leave, / them all behind. / If you strive, / to keep hope live, / you will laugh, /
    59 words, September 17, 2009
  • Ramblings of Insanity
    They're calling for a twelve foot swell, / I'd kill for a twelve foot swell / to come and wash me away. / Instead, I'm drowning / in a six foot puddle. / How pathetic, to give in / to something so little. / / I find it trivial / to brea
    200 words, 4 comments, August 25, 2009. In Angst, Sad, Personal, Rant, Thoughts

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  • The Beginning at storywrite
    Within her swelled eyes and blackened bags that laid underneath, I could see the curiosity that ate at her as she grasped at understanding why I was the way I was. Her voice cracked as she begged for just another few minutes,

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  • on Ramblings of Insanity by agendasuicide, on August 26, 2009
    It definitely could use some work, but I also like it how it is because it flew out of me in one single thought.

  • on untitled by , on June 20, 2009
    This is really good overall. There are a few kinks in the wording toward the end, but I really like it. I agree with it lot as well.

    language: 5, rhythm: 5, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 5.