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Once, things were predictable Everyone stopped to say hello, - Si quise tiempo/ If I wanted time at allpoetry
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Is that the smell of burning flesh? It seems like not even raindrops that lead to rainbows
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on "They eat at Her by LostHeart, on July 9, 2008First impression: I think that it is very important to proofread. Also, I enjoyed this.
Thank you so much!
Laurel, I really appreciate your critique. I'm in the process of revising this poem again and I'll post it up here when I'm done.