Archived Poems for ladyjanew

• Beatles Parody: Sgt Peppers Lonely Hearts Club Band

  How can I improve this?

  September 19, 2009.
• Parody of Johnny Cash's Folsom Prison Blues

  January 31, 2009.
• Parody of The Monkees Theme

  Is this funny?

  January 31, 2009.
• I can't get no validation

  January 31, 2009.
• I want a guy

  Is this poem funny to you?

  January 31, 2009.
• Angry Political poem

  December 9, 2008.
• Neediness Poem

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  July 14, 2008.
• Midnight is for poetry

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  July 14, 2008.
• Publishing Blues

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  July 14, 2008.
• Fleeting thoughts

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  July 14, 2008.
• Moist Inferno

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  July 14, 2008.
• Parody of Tammy Wynette's Stand by Your Man

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  July 5, 2008.
• Alliteration Excercise

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  July 1, 2008.
• When I'm thin: A Lament

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  June 28, 2008.
• Dedicated to Edward Lear and Lewis Carrol

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  June 9, 2008.
• The Awfully Unfortunate Adventures of Perpetually Pissed-Off Poppy

  How is the rhyming scheme on this poem? What can I improve?

  June 2, 2008.
• Pretty Penelope

  Is this too corny? Too gushy-mushy?

  June 1, 2008.
• Can't Get My Arms Around You

  March 30, 2008.
• Oh Poppy (Sung to Barry Manilow's Oh Mandy)

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 24, 2008.
• The Muse

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 17, 2008.
• Dedicated to James Wilby

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 17, 2008.
• Old People Rant

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 17, 2008.
• Induvidualism poem

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 17, 2008.
• Lament

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 17, 2008.
• Ode to Housework

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 17, 2008.
• Unrequited

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 15, 2008.
• Ode to 1981 7th grade crush

  What do I need to improve? Imagery? Rhyming scheme? How can I make this more "poetic?"

  February 13, 2008.