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Fable of The Crusades


"I'll tell you how the strife began," the gentle
old man said. We, noticing his anadem,
were curious what he meant. "Sacramental,"

and he smiled. "Their culture is as real to them
as yours is real to you." Considered askance,
so softly said, it clarified his truth. " ' hem--m

the wisdom must be found." I saw the vengeance.
*Empty! He'd stood here! Gone* His insight, vanished,
and, clinging to the edge of it . . . Clairvoyance?

No cars! No buildings here! Rutted road . . . wished
for -- peasants? Carts? Incomprehensible talk--
Oh no! Year ten seventy-one! Good God! Astonished.

The First Crusade! Jerusalem fell! Walk,
ask German, French Crusaders how their clash went....
To Byzantine Empire, triumphant they stalk!

Kaleidoscope of history reports sent
their massacre in Asia Minor and rout
of Turks, confusing loss and gain. Insurgent

rebuff by Turks soon brought Crusade Two about.
Damascus failed, eleven forty-seven. No avail
Jerusalem then fell to Muslims! No doubt

in turn, that caused Crusade three, which also failed.
Three kings were rivals but it was only one, King
Richard of England, won at Acer; prevailed

on Saladin, Egyptian Sultan, gaining
safe access to Jerusalem for pilgrim
and trade. Kaleidoscope of History's swing

toward a legend, chronicle, and victim.
Year twelve-oh-one, the fourth Crusade. That denies
respect, for during four long years, depict him

as savage. Pillaged, looted, plundered, the cries
unheard, while Constantinople desecrates!
Venetians set up Latin Empire. Surprise!

Year twelve-oh-four in the midst of Muslims! Fates
I see: that's how the hate began with their sin.
The western vandal scorns, reviles, denigrates

their ancient heritage. Such hubris! Linchpin,
the wheels fall off throughout History! We see
the reason why the old man chose me! Tocsin?

When fought for plunder and for gain, a spree
of killing does not fit the loving plan, nor
does insult, 'Infidel' when Allah amply

personifies God! Children's Crusade, armor?
It's Stephen, known 'of Cloyes' and peasant boys from
far France who come on sailing ships! A vendor

on board has sold them all to endless serfdom.
Unscrupulous, the captain makes his fortune
by selling passengers. Then German kids come

through dangers overland, by hardships rough hewn.
Not immune, their diseases and starvation
killed slowly, hundreds of their small remains strewn . . . .

So many deaths. The Fifth Crusade, duration
four years, from twelve seventeen -- twenty-one, led
by papal legate Innocent. Oppression

against all Muslim Egypt failed. The Flood said
they had to withdraw. Quit. Evacuate them.
Next, peaceful Sixth Crusade. "How many more dead?"

she asked. "Crusades? Only two, ad valorem."
Replied: "Not bloody as before, they bargained,
but we have always had a major problem

with many names for God, forgetting his love
for all Creation." There she cut me off. "So
no bloodless wars exist except in fiction! Above

all, when both sides have God in their pocket, no
one wins, and so the strife goes on." She's right, shaming
so-called developed nations with the truth. "Know

that Man is such a savage beast, destroying
its own." I drew my cloak around me, not cold,
but with shame, but she could not guess my suff'ring.

"It builds character," Mother often retold
when perspective perceives events ages old.

Author notes

"anadem"-"a garland or wreath for the head" Webster's.
"Tocsin?" a bell-alarm.
This was written in 2004 as a competition piece where syllables were counted (iambic+1, 11 per line) with RIGID aba bcb cdc rhyme scheme. (I have forgotten the name of this form. TerzaRima?) It took me forever.

How accurate were the reference books?

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Comments


  • Lad silver member
    February 2, 2007

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    I'm so glad it took you "forever"...

    ...because it's an absolutely ACCURATE and enchanting conversational poem through a millenium of sanctimonious vengeance and re-vengeance. And hubricious leaders around the world are still playing the horrible game. Your poem brings all that sad perspective back.

    I just love the way you embedded the poem into a conversation between mother and daughter, leading to the uneasy thought: "it builds character." Great line, Terry.

    I especially liked "where shall wisdom be found" - a nice reference to the Old Testament's Proverbs (or maybe Ecclesiastes?). By the way, you probably already know of Harold Bloom's newest book entitled "Where Shall Wisdom Be Found?" - a deep look into all the truly great minds of history, trying to find that now-lost diamond.

    Excellently rich all the way, Terry. Intelligent, yet still (sadly) lyrical.

    Lad

    • Terry-too
      February 3, 2007
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      I almost gave up--

      ,,,,, (narrow box even yet--am I alone with them?)

      Thank you for restoring my faith in this place. I almost gave up and withdrew Crusades. Admittedly it does not fit into the rollicking topics anymore. Gets a tad lonely after a while.

      I enjoyed your take on this poem far more than you know!
      I wish I could still go back and comment about details, but the "conversational tone" was an attempt to ease what would otherwise pile up its misery past all endurance.

      I confess many times, about world history, I have been ashamed of being (as a blonde Finn) hopelessly white. And Finns were not even involved in any of it! It took my mother-in-law (a former British Warbride) seven years in phone calls to her friends to quit referring to me as "the Foreigner." And forgive her, she really had no idea that it might offend me. I mean, I was BORN in Canada! Other than that, she was more my mom than my own mother could ever be. Passing strange.

      Now that AP courses have begun again, please do not be surprised if I fade at times, as web-work waits even now.
      As I described it before, I expect to be "on both sides beside myself..."

      Thank you, Lad, for such a thoughtful review!

      Terry