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My Angel's in shackles

You will just never be the man I need you to be.
You just see what you want to see.
You lie, then decieve, then interrogate me.

My Angel's in shackles while the Devil mine runs free.

You feed the demon in me.Keeping the She-Devil entertained with your lies and your seeds of doubt.
Sticking around because of you needs.Won;t go away because of your greed.
Overindulging your ego.When it roared, I would feed.

When I felt horrible,still everyone tried to grind me into the ground, with you taking the lead.
A job well done, unpunished are your deeds.

YOU weren't good enough to ever be my knight on a white steed.My instincts I did not heed.
"Just be good to me.", over and over I would plead.
You were not what I wanted.
You are not what my son needs.
You are not worth the price,your Love not worth the cost.
No more choosing to lose,befor it's myself that's lost
Trueblueliberty

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  • dave ochs
    February 8, 2007
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    true blue

    A fun read. as i was reading it i empahasised the last word, longer and louder and i visualized you reading it to this guy, with him wincing as you strike each last word of a sentence. hope this got him out of your system.
    dave


  • William McGarvey
    February 11, 2007

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    Very nice True blue

    Sounds like a good breakup poem. This is well done, it rhymes well and I like the attitude in the poem.

    Very nice read

    Bill