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True

I'm loyal and smart got a big ass and a big heart.
I'll be there in the finish just like I was in the start.
I'll be there when your right I'll be there when your wrong,I'll be the only one left when everyone else is gone.
I'll be there right next to you if you have to fight.
I'll be there waiting for you if you need to take flight.
Friends don't let anything come between them because they stay tight.

Outsiders plant doubt with a seed,on circumstances it will feed.their motivations I will heed.
Happy or sad wich way will it lead.
Misery loves company,on your insecurities it will grow.

In my heart I know,without your trust,what could be a field of Love,would be a lot of dust of mistrust.

Like the saying goes,"You reap what you sow."
You get good things back when you let your positive energy flow.
Trueblueliberty

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  • William McGarvey
    February 8, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this poem. A great poem explaining how to be a true friend.
    I liked the line about trust and without it just “a lot of dust...”.


    Some minor things
    There were some commas and one period without a space between the next word. And a typo on line 10 (h in which)

    Great poem! I really enjoyed it.

    Cheers,

    Bill