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Barricade

You know your day will suck
when the dead start walking the streets
and they're only scource of nutrients
is human meat
So grab a shotgun from your room and grab a box of shells
you know your life has hit the skids
you know you've gone to hell

and they say...

Run where, run where
your scared, theres no where left to hide
they come at night
to feast, inside

Grab a knife from your kitchen and, ram it in your belt
don't take the time to contemplate
they way that it felt
Burst through your front door gunshots ringing in the air
start laughing maniaclly like you just don't care

and they say...

Run where, run where
your scared, theres no where left to hide
they come at night
to feast inside

Your knife has gotten rusty
your shotguns out of shots
you look at the zombies around
boy, there sure are lots
at first they pick at your skin,
but then as you diminish
they start to tear away your flesh
and you know your somewhat finished

and they say...

Rune where, run where
your scared, theres nowhere left to hide
they come at night
to feast inside

Author notes

This is our first original song from my band, random task.

Please tell me what you think

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Comments

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  • February 14, 2007

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    haha zombies~!

    This is a sweet song! I wanna hear it! Kick ass lyrics! I was so much in it! I wanna go kill zombies~!!

    language: 4, rhythm: 4, subject: 5, tone: 5, form: 4.


    • Keaton Banks
      February 15, 2007
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      If I'm ever trrapped in a mall, I pray I have my Mp3. those zombies don't stand a chance


      • February 15, 2007
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        lol..

        haha.. Yeah me too! It would such a stress reliever to just walk outside and stab a zombie in the head...

        • Keaton Banks
          February 16, 2007
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          I'd use my paintball gun, zombies are alot less scary in florescent colors!!!


          • February 20, 2007
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            lol

            Yeah a pretty pink flesh eating monster from hell... hahahaha

  • dave ochs silver member
    February 12, 2007
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    ghoulish

    watching an old zombie movie i actually relish the encounter. then i could kill with impunity and without remorse, i want to slaughter zombies and sleep like a baby, you technically didn't kill em they're already dead. like our freak commander in chief said, "bring it on."
    dave


  • Colin Night
    February 8, 2007

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    great. this would be great for Halloween. this is really good and spooky. great job, this is one of your bests.
    -Colin


    • Keaton Banks
      February 8, 2007
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      it's not completely mine. the basic poem was our lead singers, but I did a major part fo the editing

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